Talk:James Torres

I like how you loosely tied this character in with a life of crime, especially mafia-ish stuff. It is certainly unique, and a very well thought out concept to introduce to Lovia. I do think that I should bring to your attention however, that you speak as though he is currently in existence in numerous parts of your article, while not taking into account that James would be at least over seventy years old, currently. That's one hot babe for a guy whom would belong in an elderly home. I can assume that what you are trying to do is to make your primary character from a past era, but in order to keep things up to date, and to coordinate with other active participants in this game, you must at least write this article in past tense, and conclude all of the cliffhangers where the reader is left to infer. I also would like to suggest that you improve the article's grammar. I fixed a bit of it, but new mistakes keep seeming to pop-up before me. With some much needed tweaks, this article could be well on its way to one fine article! Sorry to dismay you with this update, and if you ever need assistance, I'd love to help you. --COP Christopher Costello (Pikapi - Discuss) 03:26, July 24, 2011 (UTC)