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LLCP Poll (Vote if your in the WLP or CLP.NM or LLCP or NLS)
'''Use the voting options of eithier + or -. PRO or Contra. The voting options will be in the question. Please use signature.'''

'''1. Do you think we should make an alliance? (Not a new party but to have each others backs.)(Pro = yes; Contra = no)'''
 * Marcus Villanova[[Image:Flag of Lovia Small.png|border|20px]] 17:25, May 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * SjorskingmaWikistad 21:17, May 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * organization means power! 06:16, May 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * We should indeed ally ourselves against unacceptable conservative proposals and candidates. In election time, we might even make some deals ("a soft coalition"). A full coalition sounds nice, but is not walden's dada. We, unlike the nls and the cpl.nm, have to keep a certain balance between leftist progressivism and classical liberalism/libertarianism. 07:06, May 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 08:33, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * I very much support this idea. I don't know why but it seems almost inherent on leftist side to split up in multiple parties, who then off course have less influence, so let us break through this curtain. Jon Johnson 10:18, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

2. Do you think our parties should merge?(Pro = yes; Contra = no)


 * Marcus Villanova[[Image:Flag of Lovia Small.png|border|20px]] 17:25, May 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * SjorskingmaWikistad 21:17, May 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * not yet, but I might support this in the future. 06:16, May 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * 07:06, May 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * but I understand most people don't support this 08:33, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * , merging is a great idea, but maybe we need to talk about our party lines, to get get them closer to each other. Jon Johnson 10:18, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

'''3. Do you think that Lovia is Leftist? (Pro = yes; Contra = no)'''


 * Marcus Villanova[[Image:Flag of Lovia Small.png|border|20px]] 17:25, May 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * SjorskingmaWikistad 21:17, May 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * The most people in Lovia are progressive, and a growing number is leftist but the country, it's institutions and law are very balanced. We need state owned companies and more economic regulation before I want to classify this country as left. But we are on our way.  06:16, May 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * what makes Lovia so "leftist" is the fact that the left is much stronger - politically speaking - than the right. Although the left is divided, there is a consensus and there is leadership. All leftists would probably agree that Medvedev is the great frontman of the leftist movement, and that he is the numero uno to support in the upcoming elections. on the right, there's no consensus. The liberals don't know who their leader is, don't know who to support. On the other hand, we're not a leftist nation in that sense that we have an American-oriented Constitution and a libertarian spirit. Many of us, both on the right and the left support maximum rights and minimum state. 07:06, May 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * I agree with Yuri, our parties had a moderate score in the elections but if we would combine our powers who knows what we can do 08:33, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
 * I think Lovia can become a more leftist country in the future, but only if all the leftist parties cooperate to make this country a more democratic place on earth Jon Johnson 10:18, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Some ideas
Sorry for editing your Sandpit this boldly but it wouldn't make sense to spread this project over different pages. I hope that the people who voted 'pro' on the first question could ad an outline of the project here. What do you understand under cooperation? I would like to see some ideas because the former attempt to unite the left (some congress with speeches) didn't produce anything concrete. 06:35, May 29, 2010 (UTC)


 * Having a 'united program' in which we put all things we can agree on
 * Working on and voting for leftist laws in Congress
 * Putting forward a common PM candidate in the future
 * Yes, sounds very good tho I'm one in number I plan to make a big change to congress! Marcus Villanova[[Image:Flag of Lovia Small.png|border|20px]] 15:33, May 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * I made a page on our 'sister parties', Leftist movement. It is a short history of contemporary leftism in Lovia. 13:23, May 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * I think my colleague Yuri is the best person to look for opportunities on the left side, he know the country better then everyone, maybe he ought to start some bilateral talks between the parties willing to cooperate, doing this we will have a way to evaluate the current 'leftist (r)evolution (sorry, couldn't stand to leave the 'r' Jon Johnson 10:18, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

We can't loose momentum now and that is why I will publish a kick-ass to-do list right after the exams. 13:55, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

I think us lefties should stick together and hold like a weekly left speech at the Trading quater where... Marcus Villanova 22:03, June 11, 2010 (UTC)
 * We build a PAC
 * we nominate one peron each week of our PAC to speak at the Quarter
 * so on and so on...
 * I support the idea of having a speech every once in a while but don't forget what our main focus should be: actual changes in the law and in the minds of the people. Too many socialists - of any kind - are stuck in a phase of 'verbal praising'. 07:07, June 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * I made a pamphlet with an outline of our first (possible) achievements. Can I count the sister parties in? 09:25, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Groupthink Pamphlet
Socialism is an ideology of liberation; liberation of the dependency from one's surrounding, background and characteristics. Socialism starts from the equivalency of all people to assure the full development of each individual. The means through which we can achieve this are democracy, solidarity and equal access to the necessary services and resources by collective management. There are many different ways to reach a socialist society. The social party is however an agent and not the final goal; she should organize itself according to the democratic principle and should be transparent and open.


 * Local government stands closest to the people and should thus be able to react best on local needs and differences. Local governments should be given a clear package of powers and the current mandatory mayors are to be democratically elected. Finally, we must work on a system of participatory democracy on those local levels.
 * Our economy consists of nothing but private corporations. While we must make sure we don't suffocate the market, the motor of our welfare sate, we should take over key industries like energy, water and transportation. Public goods should be handled by public services. We also need a financial regulator like a central bank to keep an eye on the financial markets.
 * The media play an important role in the democratic processes of our society. Therefore we must assure pluralism and give a counterweight to the market logic which is invading our media. A too dominant neoliberal view will after all reduce our cultural diversity to the principles of the market system and erode values such as justice and solidarity.
 * We must fight the causes of poverty to eradicate it, currently we are only fighting its symptoms. As socialists we must come with a plan that deals with unemployment, under-education and alcohol abuse. In the first two cases we need to create possibilities, the latter is partially symptomatic but nonetheless deserves our attention too.
 * Societies are held together because its people share the same values; if this social cohesion gets lost, the communality will disappear as well. The neoliberal dogma and the auction of conservative right are responsible for the hyper-individualism which erodes our ethics. Socialists have to put forth their own functional system of values as an alternative.

These should be the guidelines for three future plans of our leftist front: 08:52, June 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) An Economic Reform Act that foresees in a stronger state by introducing state owned companies and more regulation.
 * 2) An Act on the Fight Against Poverty which expands our social safety net to education and fights alcohol abuse.
 * 3) A dialogue with neoliberal and conservative parties, engaging them in an intellectual debate.

Conculsion to poll
Well It seems like everyone has pretty much voted going on a system that PRO =1 Contra = -1 and = is 0

The answer to number one is that it's plus 5 meaning that the left can be stornger than ever over the right.

The answer to number two is... negative 2 humm... it shows it might happen in the feuture but not in else somthing drastic happens.

and finally the answer to number three is ... zero wow so we are kinda on the fence on weather or not lovia is right or left so lets make it left! Marcus Villanova 15:45, June 13, 2010 (UTC)
 * Let me put it this way: Lovia is more left than the US but not so if you compare it to say France or the UK. 'Real' leftist countries are for example Venezuela and Cuba. 11:18, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Lovian Politics by MOTC



 * I must say I don't really agree on this chart. I don't know if you have seen it but the King recently made a similar Nolan Chart which he corrected after my analysis. I think our positions are much more clear on that one so I'll drop it here. I hope this starts the debate around our position. Also notice is uses the progressive-conservative axis instead of a libertarian-authoritarian one.  06:23, May 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * [[File:Lovian_political_Chart.jpg]]
 * Some remarks: Walden is more left since they changed their name/views, the Liberal Union is more progressive and definitely more right (hence the 'liberal'), Labour and the CPL.nm have very very similar programs so should be closer to each other. 07:10, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Indeed, this is actually not extremely published, nevertheless good try. Btw i think LU is more right but certainly not more progressive Jon Johnson 07:27, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * I agree with Jon Jazz here. Marcus should have followed the previous chart more cautiously, and should have moved Walden to the left for sure. 07:30, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * @Jon: if I remember their new program correctly they want to legalize pretty much everything. They also don't oppose progressive taxation. 07:36, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Comrade liberals whether we're talking the american way or the European way are pretty much conservative, you can't change that, i know that Lovia is progressive but that party is or center or conservative Jon Johnson 07:39, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * The LD-position of the previous chart was correct (mix of progressive and conservative liberals). The LU is more progressive than the LD. You do the math. I don't ask to put them at the height of Walden, just a slight move to the bottom would be nice. 07:43, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Quite strange that you think this way, it's a pitty, but hey you do politics so you'll know i guess Jon Johnson 07:47, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * You shouldn't be so harsh for the liberals, they were ones our comrades. 07:49, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * You're the harsh one here, liberals have it quite difficult here in Lovia, so i guess we need to let them as conservative as they want Jon Johnson 07:51, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Haha, don't you think they make more change being progressive? They could be competition to us over the people who want to vote morally progressive but economically right. Besides, their page states that they want to be a counterweight for the leftist economics and the conservative moral . 07:54, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Then liberal is a wrong word i guess, maybe someone needs to add we're talking american 'liberal', american like to think liberal is kind of social Jon Johnson 07:58, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * The VLD is progressive too, no? Except for their views on taxation I consider them to be a fairly progressive party. Only on the moral axis of course. 08:01, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Everything starts with comparison (you must know that i like to compare, think of my issue not having lessons on 'tendenzen'): if i compare VLD to the democrtats in the US then they are progressive, if i compare them too a russian party (actually their might only be one :p) then they are conservative, and in lovia i think that LU is center or conservative Jon Johnson 08:05, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * I agree comparison is the best way, but let's keep other countries out. (You could use an update on Russia, you still live in 1990?!). I compared the LU to the LD and they do slightly better. Not much, but yet better. 08:07, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * My guess is they don't: penso che no! Jon Johnson 08:08, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * So che si! They dropped the conservative input of the fusion with LOWIA. As a result they must go ahead, however small and insignificant the distance may be. They would remain 'centrist' in a Lovian perspective but in purely objective terms 'cover more progressive than conservative area'. 08:12, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Wich os logic in a nearly new 1920's russia . So leave them central then, can live with that Jon Johnson 08:14, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * I never claimed they had to be progressive, just more towards the progressive and than the LD. That can be three inch or just two millimeters. 08:16, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Ld is on the chart, so what's the 3inch troubles all about? Jon Johnson 08:18, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * LD is on the previous chart, an updated version would have the LU on almost the same spot. Only it would drop a little. 08:20, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * You are comparing rectangular tools and circle tools, don't :p, something about apples you see Jon Johnson 08:22, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * What is wrong with comparing the Liberal Democrats to its successor party the Liberal Union? It is only normal to compare those two! 08:23, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * I mean you can't compare two shapes, it's difficult Jon Johnson 08:25, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Oh, well both would be pretty circular. Perhaps this one should bulge a little more to comprise more economic views on the right, but I should reread the program in order to be sure. 08:27, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Let's just keep 'em central and ask them to define it Jon Johnson 08:29, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * I hope they say 'we want bits of star-shaped pieces with little holes in them spread all over the diagram just for no particular reason'.  08:30, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Jews, are they? Jon Johnson 08:31, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Protestant would be a wittier guess. 08:34, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Wikistad Stories
Unspoilt Nature: The Four Strangers is an adventure novel by Eliah Gréco written in 2009. It is the best known book that Gréco wrote to date and one of the best-selling Libertan books of all time. It was translated in over 80 languages. Gréco put a lot of effort in the novel's preparation and considers it to be his ultimate masterpiece. It took Gréco twelve years to finish it but the idea was there for much longer.

Unspoilt Nature: The Four Strangers has more than twelve hundred pages and is the first part from Gréco's unspoilt nature trilogy. It tells the story of four children who after the death of their family grow up in the midst of Inuit. If decades later civilization forces itself upon the tribe of which the children have become a part, they don't know how to handle the collision of those two cultures. The sequels in the series are Unspoilt Nature: Tribal Wars and Unspoilt Nature: The Railroad. Gréco lived with the Inuit himself when researching for his novels.

1. Alone In The Wild
A family of twelve people are travelling by dog sled through the deep forests of Siberia. The family consists of parents, grandparents, an uncle and five children, travelling on the icy cold steppes and tundra. Meanwhile they must defend themselves against wild animals, hostile forest peoples and the rough climate. Many of them fall prey to the desolate landscape and the many dangers that it hosts. In the long term, only the uncle and four children remain; all other members of the group are torn to pieces by wild beasts or die of hunger and thirst. Others fall to the icy cold prey and the mother of the family dies with her young son in her arms when a bear slaughtered her with his mighty claws. Twelve have departed, five remain; but how much longer will the living survive?

Endless ice-fields, desolate, terrible forest creatures; long icy cold winter nights filled with roaring bears and frightening howling wolves; for the unfortunate five nothing is spared. No kindly Eskimo can be found. Searching for food by wandering around the forests, in the meantime, wary of betraying their presence to hungry predators. The uncle, who is the only remaining adult and has undertaken to feed the children, goes on the hunt and kills a deer. Experienced in life, he roasts and freezes it in the snow. Drinking consists of dew drops in the early morning and melted snow. Weeks expire and the situation of the stranded wanderersdoes not improve.

After spending twelve weeks in this pristine wilderness, they eat the last of the deer; the uncle decides that it is time to go hunting again. This time he aims for a large powerful antelope which will provide for the children for a long time. Although it is difficult due to the snowfall, the heroic hunter stalks his deer on the edge of an open plain and is getting ready to hurl the homemade spear. However, before he can be proud of his animal, the King of forests, he slips on a twig. The stag gallops away and the Hunter attempts to follow but crosses a row of stones which marks the territory of an Eskimo-tribe. After only three steps across the border a spear is thrown between his shoulder blades and he dies on the spot.

2. Four New Members
The Eskimos have already for a quite long time known the location of the five foreigners and know that only the four children survive now, almost without food. They have left the company alone, until the uncle intruded on their camp. They know that the hope for the four children to survive in the wilderness is zero. Ma'cjik, the son of the Chief, feels sorry for the four young men, and advocated their fate with his father. He wants the four children, ranging in age from two to seven years, under the auspices of the tribe places and in their ranks. The infant mortality rate over the past year in the tribe has been great and four healthy children are more than welcome. At first, Kundjuk chief would listen to no argument for the inclusion of the "blue-eyed twits" but he lets himself be convinced by his son who tells him that the man who intruded was a strong Hunter, and that the four have the potential to become the same.

Kundjuk tells his son, who has just convinced him to adopt the aliens in their tribe, to pick them up and bring them over to him. Ma'cjik leaves at once on sled he went to the place where the five have lived for the last three months, a big old cave that has known wild cave bears, full of rock wall drawings of cavemen. Here the young warrior finds the five, and he feels a pluck on his frozen heart: the youngest of the four poor orphans is very similar to his little daughter, were it not for the fact that he has blonde hair and blue eyes. The three others are obviously tough guys and he sees great benefits of their inclusion into the tribe. Ma'cjik takes the foursome on his sledge, and drives back to the settlement where he takes them to the largest igloo, that of father Kundjuk. As Kundjuk can see the four children are shabbily dressed in rags and shivering in cold and fear, and he proposes that Ma'cjik let them wash and dress up in traditional woollen clothing of the tribe. When this is done, he places the three boys under the care of Ma'cjik, who is from now on their guardian. The youngest, the two-year-old girl, he places under the care of his daughter and her husband Ílen.

Dressed and well-fed as they are now the four now feel more at ease. Tall for their age and possessed of a lighter skin and hair than the other children of the tribe, the whole tribe falls in love with them. The old ayas of the tribe become fond of squeezing the children's red cheeks and stroking them on their heads, and often feed them "goodies" such as a scoop of dried seal liver. That kind of "sweet" doesn't please the kids much, but they smile so as not to insult their hosts. Young women want to feel the hair of the children and braids that: they have never seen the tribesmen curly hair because almost all illicit black hair. The men look to accepting the physique of the two oldest boys and decisions to take from them. On the dog-sleigh with bow and arrow hunting: it is one great adventure for the guys who are soon feel at home in the settlement.

3. Like Foster Family
E nkele years passed and the foursome is fully integrated within the tribe. Their hosts have included as if it were their family, and the Eskimos are very point with their four young guests that they are already almost as full tribesmen. All children have now been given a task: the two oldest boys are to the hunters of the tribe, the younger boy helps the fishermen to help them obtain the nets and the cleaning and preparation of the caught fish. The girl is very young, but it has already received various household tasks that might be of her adopted mother Ílen that the girl diligently and with care. She is surprisingly well in the given tasks and her foster parents are with the girl, which they consider to be their own flesh and blood. The stamhouder of Kundjuk, Ma'cjik, has known about the three boys taken charge. He takes his or her duty as data protection very seriously and foster-father, the boys loving he included in his own family where he gives them the same treatment as his own sons. In the four years that have been passed since the advent of the four aliens, they have the language of their hosts learn to speak fluent and they know the rituals and customs of the tribe. Children learn fast, and for them, it is no longer than normal. The youngest among them miss even their deceased relatives already no more; of their time as two-and they have virtually no driejarigen memories more and they know that they are no better than a lot of small children and Eskimo their host parents their real parents.

Over the four years to learn all that is needed in the tough world of the tundra, where the law of the jungle. At the top of the food chain is on the page. The Inuit are perfectly built for the cold: short, broad and stocky but exceptional and strong. Strong hands with short, wide fingers that the heat cleaning and small eyes to still despite heavy snowfall. Their appearance is fully adapted to their environment, and it costs the blond aliens, therefore, a lot of effort and perseverance to adapt to the weather conditions. Hunting and fishing outside with gusts at temperatures as low as minus 40 degrees below zero is sometimes too much for the hunters pupils. There is no point in Protest and cry alone; the tears would freeze on your cheeks, you'd sneeuwblind. It is only when the boys kill their first animal, they will be recognized as men by the other hunters. And then we are not talking about a small mouse deer, no, a big and powerful beast had to be: the awesome aurochs, there is no need for the monstrous animal with thick coat and horns are greater than the arms of the strongest hunters. For the killing of such an animal was an exceptional power, but you were there to respected because it is the whole tribe of food for extended periods of time. Everything was used, and nothing is wasted. The hunters had a great respect for the animals that they had to kill to survive in the tundra. The law of the jungle.

4. The Young Hunter
D e oldest boy has become a breedgeschouderde young man with a gebronsde lead a squad of muscles and skin. He has been given the name N'lokir and is known in the tribe for its long shape, which many centimeters longer than the length of the longest hunters. He looks like a man, and behaves as the hunters, but still treat him as a kid because he his manhood has not yet proven by the fight with the dreaded aurochs. According to the tribe tradition should not get married before he has proven his manhood, and so he goes in the early morning of day and dew are igloo the aurochs to find and the respect of his fellow hunters to win. Only armed with a Club and spear, he goes on path, seemingly good spirits and my self-confidence but internal vibrating of fear. The girls of the tribe of waving him smiling, all hoping that he will succeed in its purpose and give them as his wife.

What N'lokir in its youthful enthusiasm has forgotten, is that it is a folly is to only to hunting. The initiation-rite consists of causing the death of an aurochs, but that does this not only does this: the chance that he only a death aurochs is small, and the chance that he manages the beast then change it back to take on its own is really even smaller. After a trip of several hours through the wilderness N'lokir came against a aurochs, as he had already planned, but the courage sank the young warrior perfectly in the shoes when he the huge size of the beast saw that there, where you are fearless rehashed and the Hunter looked at with a smalende look as if he wanted to say: "I fear you and not the tail". All of a sudden the hunter came up with the stupid was that he had committed, only behind a aurochs. How would he ever be able to expect with thousand pounds dead meat in his arms the many miles to the settlement could successfully completed? That could even the legendary grandfather of Kundjuk have not been able to do, and that was known as the strongest Hunter who the tribe had ever known. To the dismay of the aurochs N'lokir ran at dead quiet, comfortably walk, away from him and wobbled over slow and fearless in the forest, as if it were mighty animal nothing or no one still feared. The young Hunter Ashamed slunk off to the long journey home to accept without to have reached his goal.

N'lokir ran with unsupported, bent shoulders and shuffled shy with his feet. Every now and then he continued against a tree, to the ground Spades or cancelling, especially in itself. The Hunter were right; he was still not a man, he was just a kid. How would he be so stupid? He had himself gigantic overrated and embarrassed now. In all its anger and disappointment forgot the Huntsman, however, all the rules that the elderly had taught him: respect for nature, quiet and calm, self-control. Silent Hunters were forced to travel, so as not to draw the attention of predators. They were not welcome, especially if a hunter all alone on the road was gone. All of this was, however, will be fully N'lokir, of whom he, and he had not by what kind of a dangerous situation himself. All of a sudden, just one mile away from the settlement, he was standing face to face with a large White wolf, a huge specimen with face covered with scars. The beast growled false sharp yellow teeth, and straightened his back, ready to pounce on the unfortunate Hunter. N'lokir, knots at the ready, was ready to take on the wolf and then ventured that the jump while the foam him from the mouth dripped, hit the young Hunter the Wolf still during the course of a jump with the knots mercilessly against the ribs. The beast jankend fell on the ground and the smote the animal with a second blow to the other world. That N'lokir two hours later the village caught up with a huge dead Wolf on his mighty shoulders torsend, and suddenly the hero of the village.

5. N'lokir And Hakailán
H eel for flowed from the village N'lokir to see with the Wolf on his shoulders. He walked, seemingly tireless and with a huge smile on the face, all the houses along the way to the House of Ma'cjik and explained the body is transported to a wolf for his adopted father. Kundjuk came even to the outside, along with his family and all hunters and fishermen of the tribe that satisfied were smiling and the young Hunter with their rough hands on the shoulders were right. Ma'ckjik cried of emotion: it was his decision the four aliens in the tribe, and this way already its decision now began to pay off! N'lokir had proved his Manhood and was now so a man and a full Hunter, according to the customs of the tribe. He was allowed a woman to choose now, and he chose Hakailán, the eldest daughter of Ílen and granddaughter of Kundjuk. She was a handsome young girl with lush curves and a playful smiley; N'lokir made his choice by her his hand and accepted by his hand to kiss and her eyes. Ílen, in the clouds with her upcoming handsome son in law, insisted that the wedding ceremony and wedding reception the following the next day, and the whole of the tribe was in a party mood. The old Kundjuk wept with joy and let the shaman which the ceremony for the next day had to be prepared.

N'lokir had to, such as the marine tradition, his last night as a single Hunter to spend with his brethren the hunters and fishermen in the great sweat lodge, where high were stoked the fire and the men do a feast in which the young Hunter in the Sun. Raw stories telling jokes and gross tappend they sat together and finally had the youth feel that he really is a member of the tribe had become, and as such was accepted. Late went to sleep that night. Hakailán had a similar rite of the case, in the other unmarried girls had washed and up had made for the wedding ceremony of the next day. All her friends were impressed by her great beauty and were internal secretly jealous of her betrothed, which they. They knew, however, that they had no chance with him, because he was a virtuous man and he came to his dear Hakailán nothing would come. Everyone was very early the next day, and it was tradition that the bride and the groom each other only saw again at the wedding, and that was the case. The whole tribe did gather themselves together in the home of Kundjuk, and here his beloved Hakailán N'lokir saw again. He smiled at her, and she smiled back, her eyes shy neerslaand. Ílen and her husband have blessed their daughter and son-in-law, grandfather Kundjuk gave the bride away. The shaman smearing the faces of the lovers in with red paint made from blueberries and the ceremony ended with a kiss, which the two men and women. This was followed a party that would take all day at sunrise and would end up with the wedding night jonggetrouwden. When the lovers were alone at last in their new igloo and n 'lokir the most beautiful woman of the tribe finally his call and its beheld if in its full glory, he was the happiest man in the world.

The following days were the most beautiful of Hakailáns N'lokirs and life, but after a week-long only for each other to have had there was work to be done by the Hunter, who had to work harder now than ever before because he is now a fully fledged tribesman and accomplished Hunter. He noted that when he ran by the settlement now, really everyone recognized and saluted him right away. Girls were watching with bated breath to him, his brothers were jealous and his fellow hunters made offensive comments but it could all. Two weeks later it was again: N'lokir knew to detect an aurochs and went for the hunters in the fight against the mighty beast. It was his spear to the animal velde, and it was an exceptional instance that the tribe for an extended period of time, would provide sufficient food. Once home, the tribesmen a feast, and got the best meat N'lokir of the aurochs as well as the most. He was allowed to be a guest at Kundjuk and his family, and Hakaílan came up to him and offered him a coat that they of the silver-grey wolves skin had made. The reputation of our young hero was greater than ever, and his star was rising.

The largest and most powerful among the hunters, spouse of the most desirable woman of the tribe and confidant of the great tribe Patriarch and his family, N'lokir had it all, and more. His brethren, and sister; carrying forward in the hurricane of his success and his luck, it was this once so four of the poor and the unfortunate creature once and for all before the wind.

And this ends the first part of the heroic epos Unspoilt Nature.

Comments
Present tense changes to past half-way through? Semyon E. Breyev 09:26, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * I know, I noticed when adding commentaries to the pictures. Everybody is doing things and all the sudden they were. The original story (in Dutch) does the same though. I'm not sure weather we need to fix this or keep as close to the original as possible. 09:30, August 28, 2010 (UTC)
 * Humm I think it should be English, I thought I did a good job but aparentley not! Marcus Villanova WLP [[Image:Flag of Lovia Small.png|border|20px]] 00:43, August 29, 2010 (UTC)
 * You translated very correct, too correct as it is. You kept the grammatical structures as close to the original as possible and you translated every word literally. That isn't wrong but I'm a supporter of translating the content of a word instead of the word itself. The English sounds unnatural, because it is translated from Dutch. 15:00, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * I think if that occurs, we need to paraphrase, it's alright. Marcus Villanova WLP [[Image:Flag of Lovia Small.png|border|20px]] 17:24, August 30, 2010 (UTC)
 * Why did you google-translate everything? It seriously needs to be rewritten. BastardRoyale 12:37, September 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * I didn't why, I get it it it's not okay! Marcus Villanova WLP [[Image:Flag of Lovia Small.png|border|20px]] 20:44, September 3, 2010 (UTC)
 * I like the story, don't get me wrong, I just got the impression it was google translated because many words were translated literally and others were simply left out; clear characteristics of a text translated with an automatic translator. If you didn't, then I'm very sorry! ;-) BastardRoyale 11:51, September 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * How is it going? BastardRoyale 16:02, September 14, 2010 (UTC)