User talk:Tramien/Sunrise

I think you can use some constructive criticism :) Assuming you mean "neighborhood" with districts, perhaps you could cut down a bit on the number of districts? Settlements of comparable size, such as East Hills, tend to only have one neighborhood. Also, I'm slightly concerned about the lay-out of your map. There might be some problems converting it to wikicode. For the rest, keep working on it; the base looks great. I especially like the Jewish reference, 'cause Jews are currently slightly underrepresented in Lovia :) --O u WTBsjrief-mich 14:04, September 16, 2012 (UTC)